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Adrião Pereira da Cunha's avatar

The three pieces feel like a plunge into very different kinds of pain, each one hitting in its own way.

“Sought” reads like someone chasing a love that keeps slipping just out of reach, no matter how hard she tries.

There’s something heartbreaking in her begging for answers while he keeps giving her nothing but delays.

“Flare” feels heavier like someone who’s simply exhausted and desperate for any kind of escape.

The smoke, the poison, and the imagined mercy in headlights make the loneliness feel almost unbearable.

Then “Circles” shifts into pure horror, but with a fierce, almost shocking sense of power underneath.

The violence is brutal, yet her decision to become the creature’s ghost gives the ending a wild, defiant strength.

It’s striking how she refuses to stay a victim, even in death she chooses revenge as her afterlife.

All three pieces revolve around longing and suffering, but each transforms it into something different.

Together, they leave the feeling that pain doesn’t just break people sometimes it turns them into something new entirely.

Seraphim George's avatar

I really liked these, particularly the first one. Wait. Such a great way to end it. Thanks for sharing!

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